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bookdruggie
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PostSubject: Bookdruggie's short story   Bookdruggie's short story Icon_minitimeMon 31 Mar 2008, 9:30 pm

I will soon post my newly written short story here, cause holly and lillian are both mentioned in it.. oh, and by the way, i changed the plot.. it is no longer about a serial killer and his wife.. just wait and find out.. mwahahahahahahahahahahahaha.. yep yep..
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PostSubject: Re: Bookdruggie's short story   Bookdruggie's short story Icon_minitimeMon 31 Mar 2008, 10:58 pm

You changed the whole plot? You must not have started writing it yet... or did you? Does the character named Holly die anymore? I think you should make her the main character.
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PostSubject: Re: Bookdruggie's short story   Bookdruggie's short story Icon_minitimeTue 01 Apr 2008, 8:48 am

Lillian is now the main charactor, but Holly is has such a developed role in the story, that she kind of co-stars in the story.. so dont get ur pants in a knot, holly.. just breath.. and yes i have started to write it.. i am on the 6th page.. i still have a little bit to go.. and remember, this is a short story not a novel, so it will be about 10 pages long..
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PostSubject: Re: Bookdruggie's short story   Bookdruggie's short story Icon_minitimeTue 01 Apr 2008, 10:57 pm

I don't care the Holly is not the main character but I can not BELIEVE that you made it be... Lillian! *shudders*
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PostSubject: Re: Bookdruggie's short story   Bookdruggie's short story Icon_minitimeWed 02 Apr 2008, 6:43 pm

like i said dont get ur pants in a knot!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Bookdruggie's short story   Bookdruggie's short story Icon_minitimeWed 02 Apr 2008, 8:35 pm

LoL. do i try to commit suicide? rofl
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PostSubject: Re: Bookdruggie's short story   Bookdruggie's short story Icon_minitimeWed 02 Apr 2008, 10:39 pm

noooooooooo lillian i couldn't possibly bear to lose you! you're the only reason i stay alive. *sniffsob*
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